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Can I be guilty of shameless self promotion and direct anyone with a spare couple of minutes to my blog. It's hillarious and mediocre in equal amounts and includes comedy, low brow humour, offensive rants, video games, porn, angry opinions on modern day lifeand a pinch of punk rock. The link is in my profile as the above description has spent all my crassness for today. If you hate it feel free to pull no punches. Thanks
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i checked it out and i'll give you an honest opinion. it's not bad, but you do need to work on your punctuation. i know this the internet and all, but sometimes i had to actually exert some effort to interpret your sentences. secondly, there's no cohesiveness to it, no focus. i mean there's nothing bad about it but with so many focused websites and blogs, one that is a general stream of consciousness from a cranky sarcastic guy.. well that makes up about 1 in 4 of us. if you are looking for any kind of steady stream of visitors, try focusing on bitching about celebs, games, or tech specifically.. but being a former 'porn baron' you probably know all this already.
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Lol thanks I have to admit I do like a blunt person so salutes to you. My wife constantly berates my spelling and punctuation on the blog and I guess I'm just too lazy to proof read stuff before I post. I find it quite cathartic to write occasional rants and thoughts so the fact anyone reads it is a bonus. Thanks for the honest opinion I have duly noted it.
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For those of us a little less capable on the internets, could you provide a link? Look forward to sampling it.
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